Paramore Typographical posters

Typography is something that I haven't had much experience in I decided to try it out for an online competition in which you were asked to make typographical art for the band Paramore to celebrate their newly released self titled album.
The first two were fairly straight forward, I carefully placed a snippet of lyrics for a particular song and made the main words stand out by giving them a layered 3D effect, I did this just by alternating the type colour from red and blue on each layer, I then add a photo of the band that I have edited myself as the background.
The next one was a little more out there but as a whole more difficult to read, I tried to recreate the band's logo out of the entire lyrics from one of there songs, visually I really like this piece but there is absolutely no chance of reading it in the right order I may try make it more readable in the future.